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Re: Fwd: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-atompub-protocol-14.txt




Asbjørn Ulsberg wrote:

9.7 The Slug: Header [3]

Slug is a HTTP entity-header [...]

Replace 'a' with 'an', as 'HTTP' is pronounced with a wovel and not a consonant.

HTTP is aspirated where I am. No-one _says_ "an http server" I hope. Which means I should fix 'an HTTP' in the security section.


Also, has there been a discussion about using the 'Title'[4] header instead of inventing a new one for this purpose? In the same vein, couldn't atom:description be populated by the 'Content-Description'[5] header in various circumstances?

10.2 The "app:edited" Element [6]

What is the relation between 'app:edited' and the 'Last-Modified' HTTP header? Can this be explicitly mentioned somehow?

There's none specified; do we really need to say that? I don't want to start another round of this; the set of things we don't specify is too big.

cheers
Bill