Re: Fwd: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-atompub-protocol-14.txt

[Duncan Cragg <duncan@xxxxxxxxx>]

Two small contributions:



> HTTP is aspirated where I am. No-one _says_ "an http server" I hope. 
> Which means I should fix 'an HTTP' in the security section.
I say 'an http server' - I'm not sure what you mean by aspirated, but 
the letter 'h' is pronounced 'aitch' down here in Suwwey, England!

Do you mean that you say 'haitch'?  I believe that's 'wrong' for some 
definition of truth that no doubt disregards regional variations.




""
Service Documents are identified with the "application/atomserv+xml" 
media type (see Section 16).
16.1 Content-type registration for 'application/atomserv+xml'
""

This should be 'atomsvc', yah?  :-)



Duncan