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Re: draft-gregorio-atompub-multipart-02

OK, done all of those updates with one exception, instead of
adding 'start' to the example, I added another example with 'start'.
I want to show both cases, where start indicates the root, and where
the first item is the implicit root.

   http://atompub-mulitpart-spec.googlecode.com/svn/trunk/draft-gregorio-atompub-multipart-04-from-3.diff.html
   http://atompub-mulitpart-spec.googlecode.com/svn/trunk/draft-gregorio-atompub-multipart-04.html
   http://atompub-mulitpart-spec.googlecode.com/svn/trunk/draft-gregorio-atompub-multipart-04.txt

Due to a quirk in the tool chain when we moved into the month of
"September" along with the addition of the word "Resource" to the title
caused the tools to fail. The month of "August" is fine, so is "September"
if the title is shortened. I opted for the latter. I didn't wrestle with the
tools further.

Barring any shouting I will send these off to be published as the -04 version
tomorrow.

   Thanks,
   -joe

On Sat, Aug 16, 2008 at 11:03 PM, Davanum Srinivas <davanum@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> Joe,
>
> Here's my take #2
>
> Changes Summary
> - Remove extra "more" as pointed out by Dirk
> - Explicitly point out that the service collection does not
>  allow audio and text via multipart
> - Example shows a gif, but text just talks about image/jpeg, image/png
>  so adding image/gif to the text
> - Fix service document to add image/jpeg (either we do this or remove
>  image/jpeg from the text)
> - Example
>  - s/content-type/Content-Type/
>  - boundary and type is missing a semi-colon at the end of the line
>  - missing start attribute (used to indicate which mime part is
>    the first one)
>  - Add type="image/png" to the edit-media link
>
> thanks,
> dims
>
> On Fri, Aug 15, 2008 at 12:53 PM, Dirk Haun <dirk@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
>>
>> Davanum Srinivas wrote:
>>
>>>Then please fix the text and add image/gif in there.
>>
>> In addition to the png/gif/jpeg confusion in that section, there's also
>> another typo in section 5:
>>
>>  attribute's value MUST be one more more tokens, space-separated if
>>
>> I guess that should read "... one OR more tokens, ..."
>>
>> bye, Dirk
>>
>>
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