Editorial comments on draft-atompub-protocol-00

[Tim Bray <Tim.Bray@xxxxxxx>]

[page 3/sect 1.1] busted sentence: 'the and "OPTIONAL"'

[page 5/sect 3.1.3.3] the description of code 400 is borked, see the 
sentence "A short description of the error..."

Same for 3.1.3.4.

[page 5/sect 3.2] the description reads like it's forbidden to do a PUT 
without doing a GET first.  Is this true?  If I know the URI and I know 
what I want to put there, can't I just blast it in?

[page 6/sect.3.2] there's nothing about return codes.  Perhaps you need 
a @to-do note?

[page 6/sect 3.3] Could the FeedURI and PostURI be the same URI?  I 
assume so, but it might be better to be explicit.