Re: I-D ACTION:draft-nottingham-atompub-feed-history-09.txt

["Franklin Tse" <peaceable_whale@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

Two issues found.

In "Example: Atom-formatted Complete Feed", there is no <description> element in Atom 1.0, <subtitle> should be used instead.

<?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?>
   <feed xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom";
    xmlns:fh="http://purl.org/syndication/history/1.0";>
    <title>NetMovies Queue</title>
    <description>The DVDs you'll receive next.</description>

Also,

7.2. Informative References


   [RSS2]                          Winer, D., "RSS 2.0 Specification",
                                   2005, <http://blogs.law.harvard.edu/
                                   tech/rss>.

Should the reference be changed to http://www.rssboard.org/rss-specification by the RSS Advisory Board?

Franklin Tse

----- Original Message -----
From: "Mark Nottingham" <mnot@xxxxxxxx>
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Sent: Tuesday, April 24, 2007 10:35
Subject: Fwd: I-D ACTION:draft-nottingham-atompub-feed-history-09.txt 

> 
> FYI; the only substantial change here is to the Security  
> Considerations (as a result of security directorate review).
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> Diffs at:
> http://www.mnot.net/drafts/draft-nottingham-atompub-feed-history/ 
> draft-nottingham-atompub-feed-history-09-from-8.diff.html
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>> Title : Feed Paging and Archiving
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>> Filename : draft-nottingham-atompub-feed-history-09.txt
>> Pages : 17
>> Date : 2007-4-23
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>> This specification defines three types of syndicated Web feeds that
>>    enable publication of entries across one or more feed documents.
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