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[AS2] minor typographical errors
Here are some (trivial) typographical errors (features :-)) of AS2-07,
noticed during a recent reading:
1. The string "AS 2" is often used where "AS2" would be more consistent.
2. Bottom of page 4 "For MDNS, ..." should read "For MDNs, ..."
3. Page 5, para 2: "referred to as "generalized receipts."
(there is a missing close quote).
4. Page 7, para 2: "The term "Receipts" is here used". "Receipts"
should not be capitalised.
5. Page 19, para 3: What is a "P.A.I.N. requirement"? I think this
needs some kind of reference or at least an expansion of the
acronym.
6. Example C.1 uses the rsa-md5 signature algorithm. This is correct,
but according to AS1 SHA1 is RECOMMENDED (though AS2 seems silent on
this point). Also the value "rsa-md5" appears to be historical and
should be just "md5" anyway (from AS1 page 14).
Deep joy,
Chris.
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Chris Davenport chris@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Davros Computer Systems