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Re: [AS2] minor typographical errors
PAIN is Privacy, Authentication, Integrity, Non-repudiaton
Chris Davenport wrote:
>
> Here are some (trivial) typographical errors (features :-)) of AS2-07,
> noticed during a recent reading:
>
> 1. The string "AS 2" is often used where "AS2" would be more consistent.
>
> 2. Bottom of page 4 "For MDNS, ..." should read "For MDNs, ..."
>
> 3. Page 5, para 2: "referred to as "generalized receipts."
> (there is a missing close quote).
>
> 4. Page 7, para 2: "The term "Receipts" is here used". "Receipts"
> should not be capitalised.
>
> 5. Page 19, para 3: What is a "P.A.I.N. requirement"? I think this
> needs some kind of reference or at least an expansion of the
> acronym.
>
> 6. Example C.1 uses the rsa-md5 signature algorithm. This is correct,
> but according to AS1 SHA1 is RECOMMENDED (though AS2 seems silent on
> this point). Also the value "rsa-md5" appears to be historical and
> should be just "md5" anyway (from AS1 page 14).
>
> Deep joy,
>
> Chris.
>
> --
> Chris Davenport chris@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> Davros Computer Systems
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