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AS#2: some minor bits of English
A few nits
in as2-10 ...
- page 5 (seems to be page 5 in -11 pre-draft too)
" Many of the specifications referenced by [MIME-TYPES] were
designed for SMTP transports. Implementors are advised to make
appropriate adjustments for HTTP transport as indicated in
section 4 of this document."
'this document' is ambiguous - I went looking in the draft and not the reference.
- section 2.4 last few lines (seems to be section 2.3 in the -11 pre-draft)
"making use of the HTTPS scheme to obtain security privacy."
'security privacy' is not English
- bottom of page 14 (middle of page 15 in -11 pre-draft)
" Otherwise the automated acknowledgement semantics are left open
to further semantic specification by specific electronic commerce"
semantic overload ?
-section 3.2.4 (both docs)
As https is recommended - should there not be some discussion of the TLS multi-hosting problem (X.509 DN in cert vs HOST parm in HTTP)
Paul Ford-Hutchinson : eCommerce application security : paulfordh@xxxxxxxxxx
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