Re: Reissue: last call on all working group protocol documents

[Gregory Neil Shapiro <gshapiro@xxxxxxxxxxxx>]

gshapiro> Just a reminder that I had posted comments for mtqp-04 and
gshapiro> model-04.  Tony ack'ed the changes so once the -05 versions of
gshapiro> those two documents are sent to the I-D repository I think we can
gshapiro> move forward with the last call.

I see the new I-D's are out, thanks Tony!

All of my old comments were integrated.  But what good would I be if
I didn't make new ones?  :)

draft-ietf-msgtrk-mtqp-05.txt states:

+1.2.  Changes Made for -06
+Added opt-parameter to STARTTLS and description.
+
+1.3.  Changes Made for -05

But the STARTTLS optional parameter was added to the -05 version, not the
-06 version.  I don't think this really matters for last call.

Unfortunately, this one should be fixed before last call:

+     option identifier: STARTTLS
+     option parameters: none
+     added commands: STARTTLS
+     standard commands affected: none
+     specification reference: RFC TBD
+     discussion: see RFC TBD

I think "option parameters" should list the optional [hostname] parameter.
Also, do we need to define "hostname" in section 12?

     starttls-command = "STARTTLS" [hostname] CRLF

I had used opt-text instead of [hostname] in patch I mailed to avoid this.