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Re: Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-pkix-3281update-05

At 3:00 PM -0400 5/19/09, McCann Peter-A001034 wrote:
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer
for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
<http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html> ).

Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before
posting a new version of the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-pkix-3281update-05
Reviewer: Pete McCann
Review Date: 19 May 2009
IESG Telechat date: 21 May 2009

Summary: Ready, still 2 nits.

Major issues: none
Minor issues: none
Nits/editorial comments:

The acronym CA (Certificate Authority) should be spelled out
in the Terminology section.

Section 7.1, there is still a typo: s/withing/within


I agree that acronyms should be expanded on first use, but the acronym CA expands to certification (not certificate) authority.