Part1 last call comments

["Jim Schaad" <jimsch5@xxxxxxxx>]

1.  Section 4.2.2.2 - Do you consider the reference to PKIX TSA to be
nomative or not?  I would not recommend this for progression of the part1
draft.

2.  Section 4.2.2.2 - "the Time STamp" should be "the Time Stamp"

3.  Section 4.2.2.2 - Recommend moving the defintion of id-ad-caRepository
to implicit ASN.1 module since that is where accessLocation is located.

4. Section 3.3 - Minor point,  in paragraph 4 - This should be "until all
existing CRLs expires" rather than "until the next periodic CRL update".  A
CRL may be valid for more than one issue period (i.e. issue every 12 hours,
expire after 24 hours).

5.  ASN Module A.1:  Do not have a new module OID for this.

6.  A.1:
                   X520SerialNumber        PrintableString (SIZE
(1..ub-serial-number))
      replace with
                   X520SerialNumber        ::= PrintableString (SIZE
(1..ub-serial-number))

7. Section A.1
                   id-domainComponent      AttributeType ::=
id-domainComponent
     replace with
                   id-domainComponent      AttributeType ::=
 id-domainComponent }

8.  ASN Module A.2:  Do not have a new module OID for this.

9.  Section A.2
                anyPolicy OBJECT IDENTIFIER ::= {id-ce-certificate-policies
0}
      replace with
                anyPolicy OBJECT IDENTIFIER ::= {id-ce-certificatePolicies
0}
      (or fix the previous line)



----------------   Algorithm Draft

ASN Module:
Fix:
   PKIX1Algorithms88 { tbd }

Replace
            cofactor  INTEGER  OPTIONAL,         -- The integer h = #E(Fq)/n
With
            cofactor  INTEGER  OPTIONAL          -- The integer h = #E(Fq)/n


------------------ Random

part1-algs.asn(3) : warning XXXXX: Module PKIX1Algorithms88 does not have an
OID assigned to it

 --- single name would be nice but not necessary.  In the case of pkcs-9
however there should be a harmonization plan.

rfc2630.asn(254) : warning XXXXX: Arc naming collision between x9algorithm
and x9cm
	Conflicts with what's in Algorithms draft
rfc2630.asn(262) : warning XXXXX: Oid value assigned to multiple symbols:
'dh-public-number' and 'dhpublicnumber'
	Conflicts with what's in Algorithms draft
rfc2634.asn(204) : warning XXXXX: Arc naming collision between pkcs-9 and
pkcs9
	Conflicts with what's in Part1 A.1