Re: WG Last Call: draft-ietf-sasl-gs2-02.txt

[Simon Josefsson <jas@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

Simon Josefsson <jas@xxxxxxxxxxx> writes:

>>  - Section 4.2, the second paragraph is way too long and should be
>>    broken up (see my comments on SASL/GS1).
>
> I'll look into it.

I've tried to address this now, see:

http://josefsson.org/sasl-gs2/draft-ietf-sasl-gs2.txt
http://josefsson.org/sasl-gs2/draft-ietf-sasl-gs2.html#anchor9

Let me know if you can think of a way to improve it further.

Thanks,
Simon