Misc proofreading.

From: Simon Lyall (simon@darkmere.gen.nz)
Date: Sat Jul 19 2003 - 11:25:10 CDT


I notice that "message ID" is used in a couple of places ( The Appendixes
and the ihave control message sections) but elsewhere we always use
"message identifier"

I also notice that the formatting seems to have split some terms that have
"-" in the middle (like "Content-Transfer-Encoding" ) into pieces, which
may not be desired. Just about every line with a trailing "-" is an
example of this.

8.2.2 Item 1 probably should have "Injector-Info-header" instead of
"Injector-Info-"

Also the year in the Copyright statement at the bottom needs to be updated.

-- 
Simon J. Lyall.  |   Very  Busy   |   Mail: simon@darkmere.gen.nz
"To stay awake all night adds a day to your life" - Stilgar | eMT.



This archive was generated by hypermail 2.1.7.