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Minor Change: Wording tweak in Duties of a Relaying Agent
Julien ÉLIE suggested the following change, which seems a clear
improvement. The current text had various grammatical problems.
Index: usepro.xml
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--- usepro.xml (revision 2983)
+++ usepro.xml (working copy)
@@ -783,10 +783,9 @@
header field (if present). Exceptionally, control messages
creating or removing newsgroups (newgroup or rmgroup control
messages, for example) SHOULD be relayed if the affected group
- appears in its Newsgroups header field and and the sending agent
- and receiving relaying agents are both configured to relay a
- newsgroup of that name (whether or not such a newsgroup
- exists).</t>
+ appears in its Newsgroups header field and both the sending and
+ receiving relaying agents are configured to relay a newsgroup of
+ that name (whether or not such a newsgroup exists).</t>
<t>In order to avoid unnecessary relaying attempts, an article
SHOULD NOT be relayed if the <path-identity> of the receiving
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Russ Allbery (rra@xxxxxxxxxxxx) <http://www.eyrie.org/~eagle/>