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Re: #1416 Injection-Date: current wording proposal (corrected)
In <464E6A18.4000003@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> "Forrest J. Cavalier III" <mibsoft@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> writes:
>Russ Allbery wrote:
>>>>+ <t>It MUST reject any article that has already been
>>>
>>> successfully sent to it, or alternatively where its date
>>> falls outwith any cutoff interval as described in <xref
>>> history>.
>>
>>
>> I now have:
>>
>> 3. It MUST reject any article that has already been successfully
>> sent to it, which may include rejecting articles whose dates fall
>> outside a cutoff interval as described in Section 3.3.
>>
>This changes the meaning significantly. Is that right?
Not really. The second half of the sentence only applies IF the agent
maintains a "cutoff interval" (in practice, they all do, but if they don't
then neither wording places any REQUIREMENT on them).
But I think Frank's suggested wording covers it well.
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